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03-15-2009, 11:23 PM
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Looking for a critique...
Finally, after just over three years, I finished my Alfred Hitchcock tribute, originally titled Raven Wings. I know, it took me long enough.
I would really like as much critique as possible on the first draft. Any and all help is greatly appreciated. You can find the story here: http://www.circleofcrones.net/e-fict...y.php?sid=1450
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03-20-2009, 04:01 PM
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anyone... anyone???
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03-20-2009, 09:22 PM
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I'll read it as soon as possible.
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03-20-2009, 09:59 PM
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Thank you, Steve. I am mostly concerned about whether or not the ending is too abrupt.
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03-23-2009, 05:35 PM
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Left review, and sent a PM.
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03-28-2009, 01:14 AM
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I've got the week off, Llew *WOOT!!* so I'll pop over and read it, too!
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03-28-2009, 02:53 AM
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Thanks, Pru. I haven't started editing yet, so it's still in the same condition. Working on a special project for a friend, but once that's done, I hope to get the edits done on it. Looking forward to your feedback.
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