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11-09-2008, 04:53 AM
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Looking for Feedback on New, Complete Short story
Hey friends, I just finished a short story that I could really use some feedback on. The things I am looking for are listed at the end of the story on the archives, Two Weeks, because saying them out loud before reading could spoil plot details.
So the story is called Two Weeks, the banner is just like the one in my signature.
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11-11-2008, 03:43 AM
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Update: After Anij and WritingforLife's incredibly helpful feedback, I have revised the draft and posted draft two. I would be really grateful for feedback and criticism. This is the first story like this I've really written, so I'm a little nervous about it.
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